You’re in for the workshop!

And I can’t wait to help you make your scene description bingeworthy.

Now… Want hands-on help implementing what you learn in the workshop?

Get a personalized line edit of your scene description

Introducing: the Bingeworthy Page Edit

🎁 This limited-time offer was created as a special companion to the Bingeworthy Scene Description workshop. It’s only available through October 20.

See exactly how to apply the techniques from the workshop — to your own writing.

You’ll send me one page from your screenplay, and I’ll record a personalized line-edit video showing you how to make every word pull the reader deeper into your story.

You’ll see me apply the Bingeworthy techniques to:

  • Reshape your description to highlight only what matters.

  • Add flow and rhythm to keep the reader turning pages.

  • Evoke mood and emotion through precise, cinematic prose.

  • Bring out your unique voice while keeping your writing clear and readable.

It’s like a private mini-workshop — where your page is the star.

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What you’ll get:

  • A personalized video of me line-editing your page

  • My live commentary as I talk through each change

  • Concrete examples of how to apply the workshop techniques to your own writing

  • Clarity and confidence about what makes your description work (and what holds it back)

Why it helps:

The workshop will give you the tools — the Bingeworthy Page Edit shows you how to apply them to your own writing.

You’ll see the transformation happen line by line, so you can recognize (and fix) the same issues in your other pages.

Writers say this kind of edit makes everything “click.”

See a sample Bingeworthy Page Edit

Here’s a short demo video to give you a sense of what your personalized line-edit will look like.

👉 Your actual Bingeworthy Page Edit will be a longer, in-depth walkthrough of your full page — with specific notes on how to make every word pull the reader deeper into your story.

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Ready to see your writing transform?

Get your Bingeworthy Page Edit today — just $95

Sign up by October 20
Submit your page by October 31
You’ll receive your personalized video within 7 days of submission.

💬 Common Questions

Can I choose any page?
Yes! Pick any page you want feedback on, whether it’s your opening page or a tricky section you’re revising.

Will you give scene and structure notes, too?
In a Bingeworthy Page Edit I’ll focus on granular line-by-line feedback of your scene description. If you’d prefer feedback on the screenplay as a whole, you can always sign up for a Screenplay Consult.

What document type should I send?
Either a PDF or Final Draft doc works for me.

Still have questions?
Feel free to reach out before purchasing — I’m happy to help you decide if this is the right fit.
Email me anytime: naomi@writeandco.com

Let’s make your pages bingeworthy.

You’ve got the tools, now let’s see them in action.