BINGEWORTHY
SCENE DESCRIPTION
Write scene description that pulls readers into the story and makes every page a cinematic experience.
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Tired of scene description that feels flat, overwritten, or just… skimmable?
Most writers fall into one of two traps:
Overwriting — trying to translate every detail of the movie in their head directly onto the page.
Underwriting — stripping description down so far that the reader can’t feel the moment or see the movie in their mind.
Both problems break the spell.
Readers don’t want to wade through a wall of words — but they also don’t want to be left with a skeleton scene that lacks movement, tone, or emotion. They need just the right amount of detail to experience the story the way you intend.
When you overwrite, readers skim. When you underwrite, they disengage. Either way, you lose control of the narrative. You lose their focus. And you lose the chance to pull readers fully into your story.
Your screenplay isn’t just a “blueprint for a movie.” It’s an experience.
And if your scene description doesn’t create a cinematic, emotional ride for the reader, your project won’t stand out — no matter how strong the story is.
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Inside Bingeworthy Scene Description, you’ll learn how to:
Spot what to include (and what to cut) so your scene description spotlights only what matters.
Create a cinematic reading experience where every line pulls the reader deeper into the story.
Write action lines that flow, carrying readers through the scene instead of slowing them down.
Evoke mood and emotion on the page so the reader doesn’t just see the movie — they feel it.
Add voice and style to your prose without losing clarity or pace.
By the end of this replay, you’ll know exactly how to write scene description that enhances your story instead of holding it back.
Bonus: Line Edit Demonstration
See the difference in real time.
You’ll watch me take an example screenplay page and apply the bingeworthy principles — line by line.
You won’t just hear the techniques. You’ll see them in action and walk away ready to apply them to your own pages immediately.
What’s included:
✅ 60-minute workshop replay (watch instantly)
✅ Line Edit video (recorded live)
✅ Curated selections from the live Q&A (video)
✅ Workshop slides (PDF)
✅ Quick Reference PDF to keep handy while you’re rewriting
Give me 60 minutes, and I’ll show you how to make your scene description bingeworthy — the kind of prose readers want to read. You’ll leave with tools to make your writing flow, pop, and feel cinematic — so every reader sees your story the way you intended.
What Writers Are Saying
“This was an award-winning workshop. Lots of gems and I am on my third listen. Your workshop was excellent and presented so well. It hit a niche that is hardly ever explored, but needed.”
— Jeff A.
“Thank you for a delightful, riveting and extremely useful class!! I think it delivered on the "bingeworthy" techniques (more than I even expected) and the concrete examples really help make it easy to understand, and the live editing was a blast (I've never experienced that before and it was utterly fascinating). The Quick Reference (resource) is fantastic!”
— Robert B.
“The workshop was fantastic—your line-by-line edit demo was brilliant and super helpful! Thank you so much, Naomi! As always, your webinar was amazingly in-depth!”
— Kat S.
“I'm really glad I signed up! Lots of really helpful stuff. Incorporating it now with a finished first draft. Great idea. More, more, more!”
— Rob F.
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Meet your instructor
Hi, I’m Naomi, a screenwriting teacher and story consultant with 10+ years of experience helping screenwriters, producers, and directors develop their projects.
I was part of the development team at Maverick Films (Madonna + Guy Oseary’s production company), where I worked on projects like Twilight, Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief, and The Stanford Prison Experiment.
I also worked with Blake Snyder on his second Save the Cat! book and taught Save the Cat! workshops in Los Angeles.
Since then, I’ve read and analyzed thousands of scripts and helped hundreds of writers strengthen their storytelling.
One of the biggest hurdles I see? Scene description that feels flat or overwritten.
This replay distills the exact method I use to help writers create description that reads like a movie — on the page.
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Common Questions
Do I need to bring pages of my own?
No. You’ll learn from examples and live edits — but you’ll be able to apply the lessons directly to your current script afterward.
I’m new to screenwriting. Is this for me?
Yes. Beginners will build strong habits from the start, and experienced writers will refine their prose for more impact and readability.
How long do I have to watch the replay?
You’ll have lifetime access to the videos and materials, so you can revisit them every time you rewrite.
Ready to write scene description that’s a delight to read?
Get instant access to the full Bingeworthy Scene Description replay for just $49.