LIVE WORKSHOP | OCTOBER 12, 2025 | REPLAY INCLUDED

BINGEWORTHY
SCENE DESCRIPTION

Write scene description that pulls readers into the story and makes every page a cinematic experience.

Just $27 through October 6th!

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Tired of scene description that feels flat, overwritten, or just… skimmable?

Most writers fall into one of two traps:

  • Overwriting — trying to translate every detail of the movie in their head directly onto the page.

  • Underwriting — stripping description down so far that the reader can’t feel the moment or see the movie in their mind.

Both problems break the spell.

Readers don’t want to wade through a wall of words — but they also don’t want to be left with a skeleton scene that lacks movement, tone, or emotion. They need just the right amount of detail to experience the story the way you intend.

When you overwrite, readers skim. When you underwrite, they disengage. Either way, you lose control of the narrative. You lose their focus. And you lose the chance to pull readers fully into your story.

Your screenplay isn’t just a “blueprint for a movie.” It’s an experience. And if your scene description doesn’t create a cinematic, emotional ride for the reader, your project won’t stand out — no matter how strong the story is.

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Inside Bingeworthy Scene Description, you’ll learn how to:

  • Know what to include (and what to cut) so your scene description spotlights only what matters.

  • Create a cinematic reading experience where every line pulls the reader deeper into the story.

  • Write action lines that flow — carrying the reader through the scene instead of slowing them down.

  • Evoke mood and emotion on the page, so the reader doesn’t just see the movie, they feel it.

  • Inject voice and style into your prose without sacrificing clarity, readability, or pace.

By the end of this workshop, you’ll know exactly how to write scene description that enhances your story instead of holding it back.

Bonus: Live Edit Demo

As part of the workshop, you’ll also see a live edit demo — where we’ll look at example screenplay pages, and apply the bingeworthy tips to transform dull, overwritten prose into scene description that’s a delight to read.

This way, you don’t just hear the principles. You’ll see how to apply them line by line — and you’ll be able to take the same approach with your own scripts immediately.

Join us live:

✅ Date: Sunday, October 12, 2025
✅ Time: 9am Pacific / 12pm Eastern
✅ 90 minutes + live Q&A
✅ Replay included for all ticket holders

Give me 90 minutes, and I’ll show you how to make your scene description bingeworthy — so readers stay hooked, feel the cinematic experience, and see your script the way you intended.

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Meet your instructor

Hi, I’m Naomi — a screenwriting teacher and story consultant with 10+ years of experience helping screenwriters, producers, and directors develop their projects.

I was formerly part of the development team at Maverick Films (Madonna + Guy Oseary’s production company), where I worked on projects like Twilight, Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief, and The Stanford Prison Experiment. I also worked with Blake Snyder on his second Save the Cat book and taught Save the Cat workshops in LA.

Since then, I’ve read and analyzed thousands of scripts and helped hundreds of writers strengthen their stories. One of the biggest hurdles I see again and again? Scene description that feels flat, confusing, or overwritten. That’s why I created this workshop — to help you transform your description into prose that reads like a movie on the page.

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Common Questions

What if I can’t attend live?
No problem. You’ll get access to the replay so you can watch (and rewatch) on your own schedule.

Will I have to share my writing or be put on the spot?
Not at all. You can be as visible or invisible as you want during the live session. No breakout rooms. No pressure.

Do I need to bring pages of my own?
Nope. You’ll learn through the live edit demo and examples provided.

I’m still a beginner — is this workshop for me?
Yes. If you’re new to screenwriting, this workshop will give you tools to avoid common mistakes and start building professional-level habits right away. Honestly, even experienced writers struggle with overwriting or flat description. The techniques I’ll share can be applied to any script for a more compelling read.

Will there be a chance to ask questions?
Yes! We’ll have live Q&A time built into the workshop, so you can get clarity on how to apply the concepts to your own writing.

Ready to write scene description that’s a delight to read?

Get your ticket now and come to the live session, or watch the replay anytime!